After marriage, whenever she cried, her MIL said "Show these tantrums at your own home and not here"
Finally, she found her "home" at the "shelter for battered women"
PS: This is my first try at the 55-word fiction. I have been reading them on a lot of blogs and wanted to give it a try. The idea for this post came from the title of Nancy's recent post.
8 comments:
Wow! Brilliant job Parul! Harsh realities :(
Wow! nice try.. real sad state of affairs though.
@Swaram: Thanks so much Swaram.
@Shruti: Thanks. Yeah, the situation is sad but so often so true !!
this.was.brilliant.
Bitter truth portrayed wonderfully in very few words :)
Excellent work for a first attempt at 55 fiction :D
Keep up the good work Parul
Cheers!!
@MumbaiDiva: Thanks for the encouragement.
@Chatterbox: Welcome to my blog and thansk for your appreciation.
That was hard-hitting really....written very well!!!!
That was EXCELLENT!!! What a 55-er. Brilliant. Take a bow, Parul!
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